24.1.08

Response to definition by Anna Malakhova

Perekrest Varvara
The best features of this paragraph is intelligibility and clearness.
The topic sentence is long, but it contains a main controlling idea of this definition. There are several supporting sentences that add relevant details which support main idea and topic sentence.
There is no concluding sentence and transitional signals apart from “also”, but all of the sentences still flow smoothly. There are no unclear sentences.
I haven’t noticed any errors in grammar, but I would change the last sentence to “these types are…” or “they are…”.

1 comment:

Yaroslava Fedoriv said...

The response needs stylistic polishing