Kateryna Glevatska
According to the extended definition, the best feature of it can be about protection of family abuse in Ukraine. In general, format is correct, but the first sentence is too big and seems unclear. It can be divided in two clearer sentences. All of the sentences take part in definition, and term is explained from different sides. But, there are no transition signals, therefore sentences do not flow smoothly. Also, coherence is not clear, as for me. I did not understand connection between general definition of Family abuse and Ukrainian types of it.
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