Peer response to the definition paragraph by Kateryna Glevatska

Mykola Sioma

The best feature of Anna’s definition paragraph is its scientific brevity. It is clear that paragraph is about carbon.
The format of her paragraph is perfect - her topic sentence in extended definition is the same as sentence definition. It is good because paragraph is about physical element and there is no need to create a new definition. The main idea is to give general information about the structure of activated carbon. Kateryna Glevatska did not need to add more details to explain it just because it is general information. The phrase "due to this" is used to summarize unique characteristic of carbon. The concluding sentence begins in an appropriate way. All the sentences flow smoothly and well connected; there are not any grammar, and mechanics errors.