Peer response to definition paragraph by Valentyn Danylyuk

Iana Zborshchyk, group 13

The best feature of Valentyn’s paragraph is the content of the paragraph. He gave all necessary information about the brand, so the readers could easily understand what it is. He also shows a sense of historical development of the term “brand”. Valentyn used the appropriate paragraph format. The topic sentence clearly defines the meaning of the word “brand“ and shows the main idea of it. Supporting sentences mostly gives only additional information about the defined word. However, it would be better to provide more explanations for the topic sentence. There is no clear concluding sentence, but it is not obligatory in definition paragraph. Nevertheless, at the end Valentyn one more time remindS the readers OF the main feature of brand. Sentences of the paragraph flow smoothly, but the overall structure can be improved by adding transitional phrases. There are no grammar mistakes. All pronouns are used correctly.