Peer Response to extended definition by Iana Zborshchyk

Valentyn Danylyuk

The extended definition by Ianna Zborshchyk instructs us about the human capital. The best feature of this paragraph is the topic, because nowadays interest to the intellectual capital in the economic science is growing. Format of this paragraph is clear correct (except absence of the indent at the beginning, but as it is one paragraph it is not necessary). The topic sentence of this paragraph is clear. It has a controlling idea that briefs us about the main points of the paragraph. The main idea of supporting sentences is clear. They explain topic sentence completely; there is no necessity to add more details (except, possibly, mention of historical change and development of this term). The last sentence of the paragraph can be called the concluding sentence, but it does not begin with an appropriate end-of-paragraph signal. All sentences of the paragraph support topic sentence and flow smoothly. There are no inconsistent pronouns. Transition signals are used appropriate. There are no unclear sentences. The grammar and mechanics are good. Ianna’s extended definition adequate to the main requirements of the extended definition paragraph.