by Fedir Baior
The extended definition of “Stock market” is quite brevity. It is clear that paragraph is taken from scientific literature. The paragraph does not begin with the topic sentence. The extended definition gives us the clear idea about stock market that is understandable both for economists and for other people. The topic sentence expresses an opinion about the topic in letter and in spirit. There are used the specific details for support like explanations, which explicate the details of stock market. Although it would be better to provide more explanations. All sentences are logically structured that is why directly support the main idea of the topic sentence. However, a concluding sentence is missing. It seems like there are no grammar mistakes. Yuliya’s extended definition has relevance to study claims.
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