Peer Response to M. Soroka's Definition Paragraph

by Maryana Luchynets

gr.13

Mariana Soroka gives definition of European Union. I like the way the material is presented. It is clear and interesting. This definition is logically structured. There is a topic sentence with controlling idea, which is clear. The paragraph has unity. All sentences support the topic sentence. The supporting sentences help to develop the central idea and there is no need to add more details. I didn’t find any unclear sentences and errors in mechanics and grammar.