Argument
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Counterargument
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Rebuttal
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First a theoretical science
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Knowledge is gained during working
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To work properly you should be theoretically prepared
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PR is very important for business
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Advertising is enough
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Two-way communication gives more advantages than one-way one
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There are several prejudices connected with Public Relations.
It is obvious that every science is to be learned first on the theoretical
level. Indeed, much knowledge is gained during working in this sphere. But
still to work properly you should be theoretically prepared and it prevents you
from making basic mistakes. It is necessary to say that PR is very important
for business. Although it is thought that advertising is just enough to be
successful. But there is a common knowledge that two-way communication gives
more advantages than one-way one because in that case consumer feels more
satisfied. Therefore, the PR science is facing problems caused by prejudices and so
something has to be done with it.
1 comment:
1. The best feature of this paragraph is the idea that PR manager should be prepared theoretically and business should provide a two-way communication;
2. The format is correct;
3. There is a clear topic sentence. It has the controlling idea of PR prejudices;
4. The main idea is clear;
5. The concluding sentence begins with an appropriate end-of-paragraph signal – “therefore”;
6. All of the sentences support the topic sentence;
7. The sentences flow smoothly and appropriate transition signals are used;
8. The sentences have one main clear idea in each;
9. There are no errors in mechanics and grammar.
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