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Argument
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Counterargument
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Rebuttal
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contradicts
real historical events
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conveys the
spirit of the age
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criticizes
Catholicism that appeared 500 years after “Velesova knyha” was written
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“Velesova
knyha” that is considered to be Old Ukrainian monument to the cultural history is
fake. One reason is that its content contradicts real historical events, modern
theories of Slavs’ ethnical development. It should be admitted that it conveys the
spirit of the age, in particular, paganism and other beliefs. However, its
author criticizes Catholicism although the text had been created 500 years
before the dissidence of the Christianity. Therefore, “Velesova knyha” should
not be studied as original monument to that age.
Source: В.
Лучик. До питання про автентичність т.зв. «Велесової книги» // Новітні міфи та
фальшивки про походження українців [збірник
статей]
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Critical Response. Maria Pozniakova
1-2. The best feature of this paragraph is its clearness. Everything is on its places; the paragraph looks like the model and the format is correct.
3. The topic sentence is clear and it has the controlling idea.
4.As for the supporting sentences, I would recommend to add some more details; though, the main idea is clear.
5.The concluding sentence is written appropriately.
6-7. All sentences flow smoothly and support the topic sentence. Transitional signals are used properly.
8. The first sentence does not look very clear, I would recommend to improve it by using a clearer structure.
9. A comma should be put before the word 'although'. Also, single quotes should be used instead of double (“Velesova knyha”).
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