5.2.13

Contrast and Comparison paragraph. Alisa Demina


The changes in logic in the twentieth century were revolutionary. Before, so-called “classical” logic was the only dominant paradigm and was seen as an explanation of reasoning when each question had only one correct answer. But in the late twentieth century a few isolated mathematicians pursued different pluralist viewpoint on it. Classical logic is adequate for the needs of mathematics, but it is inappropriate for an examination of everyday nonmathematical language; it disregards causality, relevance, and other components of everyday reasoning. The semantics of classical propositional logic can be described just in terms of true (1) and false (0); for example, the table for classical implication is shown below[1]. But some non-classical logics deal with statements whose values need not be absolutely false or true, but may lie somewhere in between. However, most of today’s introductory logic textbooks still concentrate on just classical logic, and others can be found only in more advanced books and in research journals, heavily algebraic and inaccessible to beginners. So the power of modern logic made anything before obsolete, or, more correctly, is seen through radically new eyes.

 P  Q P → Q 

 0  0 
 0  1 
 1  0 
 1  1 


[1] Classical & Nonclassical Logics. An introduction to the mathematics of propositions
October 2005 - by Eric Schechter (Vanderbilt University) [http://www.math.vanderbilt.edu/~schectex/logics/]

ACR paragraph. Alisa Demina


Ancient philosopher Zeno formulated his famous paradoxes to criticize the idea of continuous motion in infinitely divisible space and time. One of them is called “Achilles and the tortoise”. Achilles, who is the fastest runner of antiquity, is racing to catch the tortoise that is slowly crawling away from him. Both are moving along a linear path at constant speeds. In order to catch the tortoise, Achilles will have to reach the place where the tortoise presently is. However, by the time Achilles gets there, the tortoise will have crawled to a new location and so on forever. So he will never catch the tortoise. Zeno claims that if we believe that Achilles succeeds and that motion is possible, then we are victims of illusion. Plenty of philosophers tried to solve this paradox. One of the attempts, called “Standard Solution”, uses calculus based on classical Newtonian mechanics. In general, we should abstract the goals of Achilles to a linear continuum of point places along the tortoise’s path. It is necessary to consider an infinite geometric series (10, 1, 1/10 , 1/100...)  and know that a sum of the infinite series could be a finite digit. So there can be the point of “meeting” of Achilles and tortoise in certain conditions. But a purely mathematical solution is not sufficient: the paradox not only deals with abstract mathematics, but how it correlates with physical reality. In this way we just disregard Zeno’s question about space, is it discrete or continuous? So even today Zeno’s paradoxes are open and unsolved.


Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
because of  infinite number of points Achilles must reach where the tortoise has already been, he can never reach the tortoise
  • we should abstract the goals of Achilles to a linear continuum of point places along the tortoise’s path
  • to consider an infinite geometric series
  • there can be the point of “meeting” of Achilles and tortoise in certain conditions
paradox not only deals with abstract mathematics, but how it correlates with physical reality. 

Internet Encyclopedia of Philosophy. Zeno's Paradoxes [http://www.iep.utm.edu/zeno-par/]

Critical Response to the ACR Paragraph 'An Editorial on Class Sizes in School'


1. The best feature of this paragraph is the argumentative part of it. The arguments which are given to support author’s position are strong and clearly formulated.
2. In general format of paragraph is correct, but it can be difficult to use it as a model because the structure of it is not very strict (especially, the opposing idea is not stated clearly) and the style of writing is rather informal.
3. The topic sentence is clear, but the controlling idea is formulated in another sentence.
4. The supporting sentences reveal the controlling idea and give a number of useful details.
5. The concluding sentence clearly restates the controlling idea, but there is no appropriate end-of-paragraph signal.
6. All the sentences support the controlling idea.
7. The sentences flow smoothly, transitional signals are used, but in some parts of paragraph there is no transition, and it is difficult to follow the structure.
8. The first four sentences could be represented as one properly constructed topic sentence.
h   9. The author very often uses informal and expressive words and constructions (I’ve      noticed; large; few; hard; greater).

ACR paragraph. Arseniy Fedosiuk



Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
Central Council of Ukraine was established by the old Ukrainian intelligentsia represented by the Association of Ukrainian Progressives together with socialistic organizations
determining role in development of the Central Council belonged to nationalistic movement
-          no documental evidence;
-          inability of independentists to promote such activity


The question of development of the Central Council of Ukraine being a central issue of Ukrainian revolution caused great historical discussions that were held in last 60 years and it resulted in a conception according to which Central Council was established by old Ukrainian intelligentsia in collaboration with socialist circles. After numerous studies, involving large arrays of documents, were performed concerning this issue, Ukrainian historiography with all the confidence claims that the very idea of the formation of Central Council should be credited to Association of Ukrainian Progressives and social-democratic groups of D. Antonovych. It means that overall ideological basis and background of Central Council can be described as socialistic. Though, some historians refused to accept such point of view. They proposed alternative concept based on which the determining role was attributed to nationalist movement – either to Ukrainian National-Democratic party with leadership of M. Michnovskiy, or fictional Brotherhood of Ukrainian Independentists. Such ideas, promoted generally by P. Mirchuk, became a subject of considerable dispute and most researches opposed to him. Fundamental points of his theory stumble on discrepancy with official documentaries and memoirs of the leaders of Ukrainian revolution, even though beginning with the fact that nationalistic movement in 1917 was in an incipient state, just started to develop its organizational and ideological ground and was far away from political arena. And after all there is no documentary confirmation of such theory, which, on the other hand, takes place in the case of first conception.

Critical response to the ACR Paragraph by Olena Bychkovska “Should the world help Africa combat HIV/AIDS?”. By Iuliia Gorodyska



Critical response to the ACR Paragraph by Olena Bychkovska “Should the world help Africa combat HIV/AIDS?”. By Iuliia Gorodyska

The paragraph written by Olena Bychkovska is clearly structured, which enhances the reader’s comprehension. The Argument-Counterargument-Rebuttal pattern can be distinctly noticed. Transitions between the three elements of the structure are well-build and logically coherent.  Moreover, there are two of ACR patterns used in the paragraph, each supported by evidences such as statistics, experts’ opinions, and empirical examples (e.g. DREAM project). This fact makes the paragraph more convincing and appealing. However, one question remains opened: the title of the paragraph is in interrogative form, which poses doubts about intention of the author. Instead, it would be advisable to rename the paragraph into “The world should help Africa combat HIV/AIDS.”
To sum up, the paragraph written by Olena Bychkovska is a very good example of how the ACR pattern should be used in academic writing.


ACR paragraph by Oliinyk Kateryna


Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
‘form’ as a starting point which creates the ‘content’ for itself
mechanical and algebraical opinion without creative inspiration
-          ‘content’ had been already done and just can be used again;
-          value of “the labyrinth of the clutches”;

In the beginning of the past century the question of ‘form’ as a base of the composition was advanced to the forefront in the literary studies. One reason of reorientation from ‘what’ to ‘how’ is the idea about ‘form’ as a starting point which creates the ‘content’ for itself. What is more, formalists were denying the usual opposition of ‘form’ and ‘contents’ and were stressing on the unity of both plans of the composition. On the other hand, there still were lots of scientists who pursued to learn the ‘content’ only. The idea about importance of ‘form’ was rejected as a mechanical and algebraical opinion without creative inspiration. Besides, only position based on ‘content’ allowed to be inserted into the literary studies with its orientation on the social and political value of a composition. However, formalists doubted even the term of ‘content’ and offered to substitute it on ‘material’. According to their works, all the plots, motifs and artistic images had been already done and just can be used again: “The essential to represent was not the quality of what was combined, but to show how this was happened - “the labyrinth of the clutches”” [1; 96]. This means that individuality of the author can be described just in the building of ‘form’. Therefore, literary studies were reoriented to the new idea of ‘form’ as a base of the composition, and it was a big step to creative individuality over the social and political servant.   

1.               Matvienko S. A Discourse of a Formalism: the Ukrainian Context / S. Matvienko. - Lviv: Litopys, 2004. - 142 p.

ACR Paragraph, Synytsia, Maya, A2.


Gottfried Leibniz distinguished between two kinds of true propositions:  the truths of reason (a priori) and the truths of fact (empiric). Being a rationalist, he claims that while the truths of fact are purely circumstantial, the primary truths of reason are fixated in the logical structure of all possible worlds, thus being the basic truths. From the empirical point of view, however, the truths of reason should be initial, and the axioms (the truths of reason) should be inducted from them. Leibniz states that the truths of fact are always formulated with the help of logical structures; therefore, feelings themselves are unable to ensure the existence of sensual things. Thus, only reason can be the source of veracity.
Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
The truths of reason are the basic truths.
The truths of reason should be initial, and the truths of reason should be inducted from them.
The truths of fact are always formulated with the help of logical structures; therefore, feelings themselves are unable to ensure the existence of sensual things.



4.2.13

ACR paragraph. By Iuliia Gorodyska


ACR paragraph. By Iuliia Gorodyska

The principle of subsidiarity should be applied in Ukraine

Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
Subsidiarity enables civic participation.
Having an underdeveloped political culture, citizens in Ukraine will not take part in local decision making.
Subsidiarity creates fruitful conditions to foster civic participation and enforce human rights

       Subsidiarity principle, which is a principle invoking that decisions are to be made as closely as possible to the citizens to ensure effectiveness in achieving public objectives, should be applied in Ukraine. Subsidiarity principle is closely related to federalization approach, first dispute over which opened the Federalist Papers 1787 by Hamilton, Madison and Jay [1], and which is a controversial issue in Ukrainian politics as well. Applying subsidiarity would offer the Ukrainian civil society many possibilities to participate in decision making process more widely than it does now. It should be admitted that the weak political culture of Ukrainian society could possibly pose certain burdens to development of subsidiarity, as citizens may not be active in local decision making process and may be indifferent to current communal problems. However, subsidiarity creates fruitful conditions to foster civic participation and thus enforce human rights for participation and inclusion, as written in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights [2], which Ukraine is committed to. Moreover, opennes of local politics would enhance citizens' real influence on the national level politics, stipulating in this way the civil society activity. Therefore, subsidiarity principle must find its embodiment in Ukrainian political structure and be applied on local, regional and national levels. 




[1] The Federalist Papers, 1964. - Available from: <http://www.foundingfathers.info/federalistpapers/> - Title from the screen.
[2] The Universal Declaration of Human Rights. - Available from: <http://www.un.org/en/documents/udhr/index.shtml> - Title from the screen.


ACR paragraph. Mariya Levonova.

argument
counterargument
rebuttal
Impressionism is an only movement in modern art contradicting state-controlled art evolution by changing both content and technical aspects.
Post-impressionism is another anti-system movement objecting also Impressionists’ ideas.
Both Impressionism and Post-impressionism was opponent to current art situation and were similar at regarding aesthetic as a critical aspect of meaning and paying central attention to color.

Conversations on modern art in conditions of overwhelming possibilities to collect, share, and revise information received usually require a certain level of competence. Usually people do not distinguish between impressionism and post-impressionism[1] which may be regarded as normal, if the public is not acquainted with the topic or embarrassing if vice versa. Impressionist painters rejected the tendency to illustrate some past events close to reality and invented a new trend providing a possibility to create masterpieces on the basis of current time lifestyle implementing technics allowing expressing fleeting effect of light, atmosphere and movement. Post-impressionism is a movement which began simultaneously with impressionism and was a reaction of Vincent van Gogh, Paul Cézanne, and Paul Gauguin, who judged such representatives of new trend as Edgar Degas, Claude Monet, Frédéric Bazille, and Auguste Renoir, for performing light and colors so impulsive and proposed to emphasize on symbolism, formality and structural issues. Nevertheless, despite existing differences both branches of modern art refused from affectation of the painting, treated color to be independent from composition and regarded aesthetic as a critical aspect of meaning. Every person who takes a risk to begin speaking on art movements should take into consideration most bright nuances of art evolution.



[1] Oxford Art Online / Grove Art: Thematic Guide. Impressionism & Post-Impressionism http://www.oxfordartonline.com/public/page/themes/impressionismandpostimpressionism

Contrast and Comparison Paragraph, Synytsia, Maya, A2


Classification Paragraph
Gottfried Leibniz distinguished between two kinds of true propositions:  the truths of reason and the truths of fact. The truths of reason are a priori, while the truths of fact are empiric. The truths of reason are absolutely true and necessary, unlike the truths of fact, which are circumstantial. Finally, the truths of reason are based on the law of noncontradiction and the law of identity, while the truths of fact are based on the law of sufficient reason, first formulated by Leibniz himself. The laws of logic, mathematical axioms, and fundamental moral principles are truths of reason, while true existential statements are truths of fact.
Truths of reason
Truths of fact
a priori
empiric
true and necessary
circumstantial
based on the laws of identity and noncontradiction
based on the law of sufficient reason

ACR. Victoria Odnosum

ARGUMENT
COUNTERARGUMENT
REBUTTAL
Simargl is traditionally depicted with the bird’s tail, not with the snake’s.

Because of the influence of folklore the image of the simargl could have changed.
In Kyiv Rus art dragons’ are always depicted with the snake’s tail. This tail changes into vegetative ornament which is an indispensable attribute for the dragon


Thesis: the creature portrayed on the Chernihiv’s head of the column is a dragon.

While making a research over the creature on the head of the column in St Boris’ and Glib’s Cathedral in Chernihiv many scientists come across with the problem of determining who is depicted there. This creature looks like a snow leopard with the snake’s tail that changes into vegetative ornament. There appeared two confrontational groups of scientists one of which assumed that it is a dragon, another – that it is a simargl, mythical creature in East Slavic mythology which is similar to simurh in Persian mythology. The determination of this creature influences on its interpretation. That is why it is so important to gain an understanding of who is right.  The first group reasonably noted that simargl is traditionally depicted with the bird’s tail, not with the snake’s. Though they did not take into consideration the fact that because of the folklore’s influence this image could have changed. Still in Kyiv Rus art dragons’ are always depicted with the snake’s tail. Moreover this tail changes into vegetative ornament which is an indispensable attribute of the dragon.  Therefore the creature portrayed on the Chernihiv’s head of the column is a dragon.

Вагнер Г. К. Скульптура Древней Руси. ХІІ в. Владимир. Боголюбово / Г. К. Вагнер. – М.: Искусство, 1969. – С. 276.

ACR Paragraph. Igor Bigun


Why Social Networks Are More Good Than Evil

Argument
Counterargument
Rebuttal
Social networks (SN) keep a person online with his or her friends
They provoke addiction to online communication instead of live one
SN are the same means of communication like phones. They do not replace live relations, but make one’s friends close even if they dwell far away
A person can be express oneself in SN more frankly than in real live where his or her modesty or complexes may hinder.
Exaggerated publicity in SN often causes problems: other people see or read what they should not have and this entails consequences in real world
To avoid ethical and  other problems one has to observe the same proprieties as in the real life
There are a lot of interest communities to everyone’s taste
Too much diverse information takes a lot of time and sucks down so that one becomes attached to the computer
Problems of control appear to people with weak will or lazy who are eager to seek only for extra  leisure opportunity



Social networks like Facebook, Vkontakte et cetera have become a useful multifunctional instrument available for everyone connected to the Internet.  One of the most important reasons of their popularity is their function to keep friends always on-line. Critics remark that social networks create addiction to on-line communication and decrease personal contact.  It should be said, that social networks are almost the same means of communication as telephone, but nobody accuse telephones of such problems. Like them social networks do not replace live relations, but make one’s friends and colleagues closer even if they dwell far away. Also social networks allow a person various possibilities for self-expression. One can transcend his or her modesty and communicate without limitations; there are plenty of virtual interest communities to everyone’s taste where a person can be engaged. Of course, we should admit that there is the other side of the coin: unfamiliar people can become acquainted with personal data of a user, and torrents of diverse information can tear away from the real world. But there are uncomplicated ways of oneself control.  To avoid ethical troubles one has to observe the same proprieties as in the real life, i.e. not to do anything one would not do in public. As regards to information quags, this problem appears mostly to lazy people who are eager to seek only for extra leisure opportunity. Really engaged and serious individuals do not waste their time because they know their priorities. In spite of their drawbacks social networks create friendly relations inside humankind, contribute to self-education and self-expression, and help to change social reality which often would be impossible without them.