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Have you ever been on holiday or on a brief excursion to a place of interest? If so you are one of the millions of tourists that this article is aimed on. Between us we tourists created a growing industry that has changed the lives of many people. But are these changes for the better or the worse? Let's begin by looking at the way tourism affects people’s lives. For the individual traveller of course the development of the tourist industry is an excellent thing. It has never been easier or cheaper to travel and no part of the globe is beyond reach. Tourism improves the lives of many people because it brings jobs and prosper to regions that may otherwise had been very poor. But for some people tourism is not a benefit Those who's peace and quiet are ruined for the arrival of the developers have no reason to praise the industry. What about the effects of tourism for wildlife? Well there are advantages and disadvantages here too. On the one hand tourism has sometimes benefited wildlife especially in poor countries. If people have more money they would protect the animals the tourists come to see not hunt them. In the other hand it is true that tourists often damage habitats even though this is usually unintentional. The pollution caused by tourism only makes the problem worst. Is tourism then a blessing or a curse? I think it is both. The industry needs to take some responsible decisions in the future if the effects are to be beneficial rather than harmful.
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